Born of Frustration by MyLifeThroughTheLens @deviantART
Monday morning blues
morning with such dark hues
nothing is going to go right
need to pay my previous dues.
There had to be a fight
she said a child, I am not bright
These words, to me, were offensive
of course nobody understands my plight.
I was defensive
maybe a bit hypertensive
but they are not in my situation
yes, I am a bit too apprehensive.
My being, considered a selfish notion
a waterfall of repressed emotions
I wonder if this will ever end
to my frustrations, no cessation.
Prompt given by Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Prompt 56 ‘Indescribable Frustration’
Abhilasha Singh 
This one really twists into my gut powerful emotional poem
Thank you so much 🙂
U got the rhyming going wel girl! It was a pleasure to read. N the one about ‘waterfall of repressed emotions’, quite a beauty in itself. But if u may not mind, I feel the ending could hav been done a bit better. The double rhyme on ‘frustration, cessation’ stands-out of the beautiful flow till then. Stil, good one.
Thanks a lot. Well, the rhyming is influenced by Robert Frost. Even I felt the ending to be a little weak but couldn’t think of anything better. Thanks for your true criticism 🙂 I’ll see if I can get it to improve.
You dealt with frustrations so very well. I enjoyed reading this post, well done.
Thank you 🙂